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Neverland

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lionpants99

Published: Feb 1, 2014

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Neverland

I've been so tied up in everything

That I've forgotten to spread my wings

My happy thought has let me down

So Peter, teach me how to fly

Again, I've forgotten why

I let myself drown

So Peter take my hand

And help me fly to Neverland.

Help me fly to Neverland

Oh oh oh

You can be my happy thought

And together, we'll soar

we'll fly above the houses

And look over everyone

If you're my happy thought.

And we won't need no fairy dust

But if you want some, I'm not fussed

You make me sparkle anyway.

My window's open, come inside

Your shadow's hiding on the side

He's just a thimble away.

But Peter, take my hand

And help me fly to Neverland

Help me fly to Neverland

Oh oh oh

You can be my happy thought

And together, we'll soar

we'll fly above the ocean

And look over all the boats and

If you're my happy thought.

We can sit upon on the beach and

Dance upon the sand

The lost boys can join in the fun.

We can fight the pirate band

And taunt the man with the hooked hand

And dodge the bullets from his gun

*bridge*

Second star to the left

And straight on till morning

I know this is dangerous

But I don't need a warning

Oh make sure you-

Peter take my hand

(Oh take my hand)

And help me fly to Neverland

(Fly to Neverland)

Help me fly to Neverland

(Peter help me fly)

Oh oh oh

(Ohhh Ohhh)

You can be my happy thought

(Be my happy thought)

And together, we'll soar

(Together we'll soar)

we'll fly above the houses

(Fly above the)

And look over everyone

(And look over)

If you're my happy thought.

(Ooh ooh)

If you're my happy thought.

Oh I do believe in fairies

I do I do

I do believe in fairies

I do I do

I do believe in fairies

I do I do

I do believe in fairies

I do I doooooooo

*guitar solo*

Peter take my hand,

And help me fly to Neverland

Help me fly to Neverland..

_{a song I made because I got bored and was sent to my room for not eating ._.
Yeah, is based on Peter Pan because that movie is my dreams.

I might put a video of me singing it on YouTube.

Critique please?}

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Rebeking

Feb 1, 2014

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i fucking love it
it rhymes so well, you should start actually doing poetry, what with tony to practice with and shit

a few questions
is the whole song a metaphor
or is it just in the view of wendy

i like how you got the 'i do believe in fairies' in there too
it all sort of fits
unlike peter pan *sob of child hood*

my favourite bit is the chorus where you actually thought about backup vocals

and one last question, are you just using guitar?
if so, i would have a main guitar part (duh) but with backing chords that are just played on repeat, because sometimes if you just have the guitar the song can sound a little empty, or at least it does to me

its amazeballs, in case you didnt get the clear part of my opinion

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